The Passive Voice
The passive voice, the subject of the sentence is neither a do-er or a be-er, but is acted upon by some other agent
or by something unnamed (The new policy was approved). Computerized
grammar checkers can pick out a passive voice construction from miles
away and ask you to revise it to a more active construction. There is
nothing inherently wrong with the passive voice, but if you can say the
same thing in the active mode, do so (see exceptions below). Your text
will have more pizzazz as a result, since passive verb constructions
tend to lie about in their pajamas and avoid actual work.
We find an overabundance of the passive voice in sentences created by
self-protective business interests, magniloquent educators, and
bombastic military writers (who must get weary of this accusation), who use the passive voice to avoid responsibility for actions taken. Thus "Cigarette ads were designed to appeal especially to children" places the burden on the ads — as opposed to "We designed
the cigarette ads to appeal especially to children," in which "we"
accepts responsibility.
At a White House press briefing we might hear
that "The President was advised that certain members of Congress were
being audited" rather than "The Head of the Internal Revenue service
advised the President that her agency was auditing certain members of
Congress" because the passive construction avoids responsibility for
advising and for auditing. One further caution about the passive voice:
we should not mix active and passive constructions in the same sentence:
"The executive committee approved the new policy, and the calendar for next year's meetings was revised" should be recast as "The executive committee approved the new policy and revised the calendar for next year's meeting."
Take the quiz (below) as an exercise in recognizing and changing passive verbs.
The
passive voice does exist for a reason, however, and its presence is not
always to be despised. The passive is particularly useful (even
recommended) in two situations:
- When it is more important to draw our attention to the person or thing acted upon: The unidentified victim was apparently struck during the early morning hours.
- When the actor in the situation is not important: The aurora borealis can be observed in the early morning hours.
We use the passive voice to good effect in a paragraph in which we wish to shift emphasis from what was the object in a first sentence to what becomes the subject in subsequent sentences.
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